'Mummy's little monster' would also have been a great title, although it would have given your twist away. That's the best thing here, actually - I really enjoyed the story but your gloss on that phrase is so logical that I can't believe (to my knowledge) that no-one has used it in this way before in a horror story. I'm also loving reading horror short stories in general today! Thank you internet! Makes up for lack of halloween activities today. I've decided to join in the fun and start my own, if anyone wants to read another (not sure on your linking policy Mr. Wheaton, please delete this if you don't want links in your comments) -- http://gregbuchanan.co.uk/2011/10/30/the-tunnel-1/