I like this post, but I find myself wanting more insight and reflection about the scandal and about your own feeling about your cat.

These posts are great and interesting, but it would be more interesting with more of your commentary and reflection posted along with your pictures.

These baseball posts are great, and I think you should add them to the sports report blog. It is lacking in baseball entries. Also, because this is a personal blog, you might like to read about your own experiences playing baseball.

Also, think about adding some audio or music to the background of your video.

This is a really awesome video! I will give you a template for how to write and post video essays that include more of your own reflection about the video. But this is an excellent start!

I love how you've taken your love of sports and your passion for details to create such excellent and insightful posts. Since this is your personal blog, you might like to add some more personal posts about your own experiences as an athlete.

Great post! I now know more about tanks that I've ever known before. Be sure to use the Readmore feature so that readers can see more of your posts when they first come to your blog. As I mentioned to you in class, this topic of military vehicles would make an excellent dedicated blog that other people can add to. Let me know if you'd like to do this.

This seems to be missing something, so you might want to come back in here and make some edits to make it look good and add some more text.

This is a fun video, but you should introduce it with a paragraph above it and then reflect upon it with a paragraph below it. This will give us more of an idea of what you feel about the video, and it will also make a reader want to see the video.

This is an interesting passion to write about, mainly because I know nothing about it, but you have got me interested. If you can find anybody else interested in Anime, I could create a blog devoted to this topic.

I'm getting hungry just reading this :-) this is an excellent post about an interesting topic. He sure to use the Readmore feature so that people can see your other posts as soon as they come to your blog.

My general rule of thumb is that for every picture there should be at least 100 words of description or reflection.

These are some great sports reports! You should put them on the sports report blog. He sure to use the Readmore feature. It will make your readers see your other posts when they first come to your page. Think about expanding your post to include more personal reflections and anything else that explores who you are as a person more deeply.

This is a great idea and a good job on your blog post. Sometimes the most common things in life are the most interesting. It is a bit long for a paragraph, so try to break it into several shorter paragraphs. It will make it easier for the reader to follow, and it will give them more time to think about what you write, try to add more visual rhetoric using pictures and quotes and subtitles,

This is an excellent and descriptive post. Writing about a walk is a good way to practice writing in a linear and reflective way. It is rather long for a single paragraph, so I would try to break it into three or four shorter paragraphs.

I love this, and it is exactly what I look for in an interesting blog. I can show you how to remove the big spaces between the pictures. You might want to use the Readmore feature so that the reader can see more of your blog posts by scrolling quickly.

What a great way to use your blog to show your love of history and your prodigious knowledge of what you write about. It is all very new to me to reach such amazing essays from such a young scholar. Nice work. Think about adding some more personal posts in here to give your readers a more full picture of who you are.

Great work on all of these posts! He sure to put in the Readmore feature so that viewers can see more of your posts quickly on the screen. I'll have to have my sons read your soccer essays. They are all fanatics about soccer. I also love posts that are more of a personal nature.

This is such a good and relevant poem. Excellent job capturing the complex nature of Covid. It's also good to see your blog have more than the sports reports, which, by the way, our excellent! It would be good if you were stanzas or single spaced, instead of doublespaced. I can show you how to do that.

I love how you have taken off with all of these excellent sports reports, but it might be interesting too, to add some more personal post to your personal blog, but I guess that is up to you.

This is a great blog post. You might want to change the font as it is rather large and not consistent with your other posts. I certainly like LIFE reflections.

GREAT JOB WITH ALL THESE SPORTS REPORTS. THEY ARE DETAILS, FUN AND INTERESTING AND HAVE GREAT VISUAL RHETORIC. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE YOU ADD SOME MORE PERSONAL POSTS ON YOUR OWN BLOG TO SHOW A GREATER BREATH OF WHO YOU ARE AS A PERSON.

This is a great blog post. You might want to change the font as it is rather large and not consistent with your other posts. I certainly like LIFE reflections.