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Newton's Third Law of Physics
Opposite Forces If the apple hit Newton’s nose, Newton’s nose hit the apple. G.K. Chesterton Friction is what makes things move, and there has to be a “pair of resistance” every time something moves. This video, made by Science Max, introduces us the Newton’s Third Law, which is how there... Continue reading
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I like this post, but I find myself wanting more insight and reflection about the scandal and about your own feeling about your cat.
MAC AND CHEESE CAT
If you haven't heard already there was a massive scandal concerning Annie’s Mac and cheese because people found traces of a toxic chemical that most likely came from the conveyor belts used in their factories. As a Mac and cheese cone-suer Chester the cat was devastated. We reminisce with this p...
These posts are great and interesting, but it would be more interesting with more of your commentary and reflection posted along with your pictures.
Cat with fake green cats
My cat with some sculptures
These baseball posts are great, and I think you should add them to the sports report blog. It is lacking in baseball entries. Also, because this is a personal blog, you might like to read about your own experiences playing baseball.
The Boston Red Sox have a problem
The Boston Red Sox have a problem. Ever since we won the World Series in 2018 we have gone down hill in quality of play. This only got worse when we traded away our best player Mookie Betts and then proceeded to scrap almost the entire team. The Red Sox adopted the managing style of the Tampa ...
Also, think about adding some audio or music to the background of your video.
Fish Photos
Hello blog, As you may know, I love to fish. That’s all I do in the summer. Eat sleep and fish. I put together this very fast paced video that shows only a quarter of the fish that I caught this year. Hope you enjoy.
This is a really awesome video! I will give you a template for how to write and post video essays that include more of your own reflection about the video. But this is an excellent start!
Fish Photos
Hello blog, As you may know, I love to fish. That’s all I do in the summer. Eat sleep and fish. I put together this very fast paced video that shows only a quarter of the fish that I caught this year. Hope you enjoy.
I love how you've taken your love of sports and your passion for details to create such excellent and insightful posts. Since this is your personal blog, you might like to add some more personal posts about your own experiences as an athlete.
Quarterback Power Rankings
It can be an important evaluation to make for a football team. Is our Quarterback worth a pay day to keep him here for an extended period of time. Here are my starting quarterback power rankings for next year. View the Power Rankings... Patrick Mahomes- A relatively easy choice for #1. Yo...
Great post! I now know more about tanks that I've ever known before. Be sure to use the Readmore feature so that readers can see more of your posts when they first come to your blog. As I mentioned to you in class, this topic of military vehicles would make an excellent dedicated blog that other people can add to. Let me know if you'd like to do this.
Tank chats #1 Ho-Ni III late war Japanese TD The...
Tank chats #1 Ho-Ni III late war Japanese TD The Ho-Ni III was a late war Japanese TD or tank destroyer. It was based on the Chi-ha chassis giving it quite good mobility. Although it used the same 170 hp Mitsubishi air cooled Diesel engine as the Chi-ha, it was slower because of its large ...
This seems to be missing something, so you might want to come back in here and make some edits to make it look good and add some more text.
https://youtu.be/MrmF5yycBxs I was really bored on...
https://youtu.be/MrmF5yycBxs I was really bored on Tuesday and decided to make my whole made shortbread cookies. Hope you enjoy!
This is a fun video, but you should introduce it with a paragraph above it and then reflect upon it with a paragraph below it. This will give us more of an idea of what you feel about the video, and it will also make a reader want to see the video.
Enjoy our schools beautiful campus tour
Enjoy our schools beautiful campus tour
This is an interesting passion to write about, mainly because I know nothing about it, but you have got me interested. If you can find anybody else interested in Anime, I could create a blog devoted to this topic.
Haikyuu
When Haikyuu came out in 2014, it became popular in Japan. Hinta, the protagonist, dreamed of being a volleyball player(spiker) despite his size and height. However through his hard work he is able to make the Karusuno Volleyball team and become one of the best players. With Kageyama(one of th...
I'm getting hungry just reading this :-) this is an excellent post about an interesting topic. He sure to use the Readmore feature so that people can see your other posts as soon as they come to your blog.
Best dish in Japan
3. Wagyu Wagyu means any breed of Japanese been cattles. It is split into many grades(the better the meat quality is, the better grade they will get). The best grade is A5 and the worst grade being C. Even though you might think that grade C is really bad, it is still very expensive...
My general rule of thumb is that for every picture there should be at least 100 words of description or reflection.
Baguette V 2.0
I’m eating a baguette again
These are some great sports reports! You should put them on the sports report blog. He sure to use the Readmore feature. It will make your readers see your other posts when they first come to your page. Think about expanding your post to include more personal reflections and anything else that explores who you are as a person more deeply.
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This is a great idea and a good job on your blog post. Sometimes the most common things in life are the most interesting. It is a bit long for a paragraph, so try to break it into several shorter paragraphs. It will make it easier for the reader to follow, and it will give them more time to think about what you write, try to add more visual rhetoric using pictures and quotes and subtitles,
Description of the classroom
When coming up with things to write for my blog, it’s frustrating because I have no clue what to write about, so I’m just going to describe everything I see in this classroom. When I first look up I see a tv at the front of the room. Behind me are desks and chairs and my classmates sitting in t...
This is an excellent and descriptive post. Writing about a walk is a good way to practice writing in a linear and reflective way. It is rather long for a single paragraph, so I would try to break it into three or four shorter paragraphs.
The Walk
< Over the summer, I went on many great walks, but their was one that stood out from the rest. It was about 3:00 pm when my family and I arrive at the parking lot in West Tisbury, Martha’s Vineyard. I remember stepping out of the car and looking up at the enormous, tall trees that covered up an...
I love this, and it is exactly what I look for in an interesting blog. I can show you how to remove the big spaces between the pictures. You might want to use the Readmore feature so that the reader can see more of your blog posts by scrolling quickly.
Interesting Facts and Thoughts on My Favorite Animals
Baby sloths are truly amazing creatures. Even within the first few months of birth, baby sloths have a natural grip instinct that allows them to cling to their mothers fur, and this is all thanks to their two-toed or three-toed species. At about two months old, a baby sloth will start feedin...
What a great way to use your blog to show your love of history and your prodigious knowledge of what you write about. It is all very new to me to reach such amazing essays from such a young scholar. Nice work. Think about adding some more personal posts in here to give your readers a more full picture of who you are.
History - House of Hapsburg
The House of Hapsburg, also called the House of Austria, was on of the most powerful royal houses, or dynasties, of medieval Europe. In 1547, at the height of Hapsburg power, the Hapsburgs controlled Spain, Belgium, and much of Italy and Central Europe. The Hapsburgs often held the title of Holy...
Great work on all of these posts! He sure to put in the Readmore feature so that viewers can see more of your posts quickly on the screen. I'll have to have my sons read your soccer essays. They are all fanatics about soccer. I also love posts that are more of a personal nature.
Top 5 NBA Teams
I’d like to start by saying that this is serious and I spent hours researching this topic. This may be controversial, but I feel strongly about this top 5. 5.New Orleans Pelicans This team is very strong and could be serious NBA final competitors if the whole team stays healthy. With players l...
This is such a good and relevant poem. Excellent job capturing the complex nature of Covid. It's also good to see your blog have more than the sports reports, which, by the way, our excellent! It would be good if you were stanzas or single spaced, instead of doublespaced. I can show you how to do that.
Poem: They Call it Covid
Fall seven times and stand up eight. ~Japanese Proverb They call it Covid. It is darkness. It grasps us by the throat, Leaves us breathless, gasping, afraid. We can stop it in its tracks. We seclude ourselves. We are carriers. We protect our elders, If we shelter in place. We can stop i...
I love how you have taken off with all of these excellent sports reports, but it might be interesting too, to add some more personal post to your personal blog, but I guess that is up to you.
MVP Ladder Before The All-Star Break
The all-star break and halfway point of the NBA season starts this weekend. Many players are off to great starts of the season and it’s a tight MVP race. Here is my MVP ladder: 1. Joel Embiid - Joel Embiid is an extremely talented 7’0” center for the Philadelphia 76ers who has had injury ...
This is a great blog post. You might want to change the font as it is rather large and not consistent with your other posts. I certainly like LIFE reflections.
Celtics future: What Should They Do?
~Lyle Waldeck Celtics future: What should they do? In this blog I will be giving my opinion, and some other classmates will be giving there opinions on what the Celtics should do to get better. The Celtics have to do something about there current situation. Even though Kemba has been playin...
GREAT JOB WITH ALL THESE SPORTS REPORTS. THEY ARE DETAILS, FUN AND INTERESTING AND HAVE GREAT VISUAL RHETORIC. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE YOU ADD SOME MORE PERSONAL POSTS ON YOUR OWN BLOG TO SHOW A GREATER BREATH OF WHO YOU ARE AS A PERSON.
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This is a great blog post. You might want to change the font as it is rather large and not consistent with your other posts. I certainly like LIFE reflections.
Life’s Lessons
Quarterback Power Rankings
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