Conner, this was a great essay! Your opening and body paragraph had a quick start and conveyed your points with clarity which contributed to my understanding of your writing. Your writing beautifully conveys the power and importance of imagination in the great story. Your essay transitions were smooth too, which all contributed to the success of your essay, great job!

Finely this was a great narrative essay on your traditions of Christmas! Throughout your writing, it was very relatable which added to the power of the piece! I especially liked it when you said that “they might change a little through the years but the spirit behind them never will.” This was a great closing to your piece! Great job finely this was very interesting to read and learn about your Christmas tradition.

Well done Elliott I can tell the amount of time you contributed to writing this great essay. One recommendation of mine is to add a clear introduction of what your themes are in your opening paragraph instead of mentioning that there are themes. Besides that, this was very well written and I enjoyed reading it because of your interesting points like when you said the story “had no distinct plot, but was instead a series of memories that he spliced together.” Great job Elliot you undeniably created a well written literary analysis essay!

Well done Sam this was a very well written and informative literary analysis. I loved reading your interpretation of the theme of imagination. Throughout your piece, I loved your points of mischief, imagination, and the unexpected happening throughout the book. Your essay was backed up with evidence and clarity which contributed tho the success of the essay. Also, I loved how through your piece you mentioned muscular verbs to back io your piece. Great job Sam this was a pleasure to read!