This is Jack's Typepad Profile.
Join Typepad and start following Jack's activity
Join Now!
Already a member? Sign In
Jack
Recent Activity
Image
The Beast Within Savagery And The Beast In Lord Of The Flies “What are we? Humans? Or animals? Or savages?” ― William Golding, Lord Of The Flies Savagery is found within us all. In Lord Of The Flies, the temporary civilization which the boys form collapses under the weight of... Continue reading
Posted Mar 3, 2020 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Short Story Advice Advice On How To Write A Good Short Story Writing a short story is a long and hard process, but now that I have finished I have learned of a few important parts of the writing process to remember and consider. In writing a shorty story well... Continue reading
Posted Feb 21, 2020 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Conner, this was a great essay! Your opening and body paragraph had a quick start and conveyed your points with clarity which contributed to my understanding of your writing. Your writing beautifully conveys the power and importance of imagination in the great story. Your essay transitions were smooth too, which all contributed to the success of your essay, great job!
Finely this was a great narrative essay on your traditions of Christmas! Throughout your writing, it was very relatable which added to the power of the piece! I especially liked it when you said that “they might change a little through the years but the spirit behind them never will.” This was a great closing to your piece! Great job finely this was very interesting to read and learn about your Christmas tradition.
Toggle Commented Dec 18, 2019 on Mid Term Paragraph at 2020 Stevens, Finley
Well done Elliott I can tell the amount of time you contributed to writing this great essay. One recommendation of mine is to add a clear introduction of what your themes are in your opening paragraph instead of mentioning that there are themes. Besides that, this was very well written and I enjoyed reading it because of your interesting points like when you said the story “had no distinct plot, but was instead a series of memories that he spliced together.” Great job Elliot you undeniably created a well written literary analysis essay!
Well done Sam this was a very well written and informative literary analysis. I loved reading your interpretation of the theme of imagination. Throughout your piece, I loved your points of mischief, imagination, and the unexpected happening throughout the book. Your essay was backed up with evidence and clarity which contributed tho the success of the essay. Also, I loved how through your piece you mentioned muscular verbs to back io your piece. Great job Sam this was a pleasure to read!
Image
Jack Moskow Mid-Year Exam Ninth Grade Fitz English A Children’s Imagination A Child’s Christmas In Wales Literary Analysis Essay “Imagination is more important than knowledge” — Albert Einstein The imagination of Christmas sparkles in children’s imagination and in families’ love when they come together. Dylan Thomas’s heartwarming tale, A Child’s... Continue reading
Posted Dec 18, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
Jack Moskow Mid-Year Exam Ninth Grade Fitz English The Power Of Tradition The Jewish Tradition “Tradition is not the worship of ashes, but the preservation of fire.” — Gustav Mahler My father has always had a strong, positive influence in my life, despite the fact that I lost him as... Continue reading
Posted Dec 18, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
A Inspiring Week A Long Week Of Assignments “He who reads this quote is bored.” ~ Anonymous Of all the weeks this term that I could have been assigned to write about, I would not have selected the past seven days. To be honest, trying to find something remotely entertaining... Continue reading
Posted Nov 14, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
The Growth Of a Team Seventeen Boys And There Growth In A Season “It’s not the will to win, but the will to prepare to win that makes the difference.” -Bear Bryant It was a day to remember and the end of a great season that proved to me how... Continue reading
Posted Nov 5, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
The Revenge Tour Boston Bruins 2019-2020 Season Hype Up Video Short Continue reading
Posted Nov 5, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
Glory And Honor Honor And Glory In The Odyssey ““The blade itself incites to deeds of violence.” ― Homer, The Odyssey Glory and honor are two major qualities in the people of Greece. In books one through six of The Odyssey, by Homer translated by Robert Fagles the people of... Continue reading
Posted Oct 28, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Insert Title Here: four words or less Insert Subtitle here: Eight words or less Insert Image here: Center, medium size Insert Quote here Glory and honor are two major qualities in the people of Greece. In books one through six of The Odyssey, by Homer translated by Robert Fagles the... Continue reading
Posted Oct 28, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
The Power Of Gods The Scribes Who Craft The Odyssey “A small rock holds back a great wave.” - Homer The power of gods is unmatched. In the book, The Odyssey, by Homer translated by Robert Fagles the Gods and Goddesses posses great power and influence over the Greek population.... Continue reading
Posted Oct 27, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
The Lessons Found In Life The Life lessons Adam Aronovitz Taught Us All “Every fiction has its base in fact.” ― Gayle Forman, There are always lessons to be found, and when Adam Aronovitz came to Fenn, he reminded us all of this. In the short time we were with... Continue reading
Posted Oct 27, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
The Ninth Grade Journey How To Create The Best Environment For Growth “Good habits formed at youth make all the difference.” - Artistotle Ninth grade feels like a new path on my journey through Fenn. Becoming seniors has been a very different experience and I am still adjusting to it,... Continue reading
Posted Oct 10, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
The Power In Hard Times Challenging Times Create Opportunities for Growth “It’s Gonna Get Worse Before It Gets Better” - Noah Trainer Hard times can pose powerful challenges and hidden opportunities. This summer, while tackling the notorious Gamble portage on my canoe trip in Ontario, the challenge of facing hard... Continue reading
Posted Oct 6, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
The Power Of Lucerne's Beauty The Powers Of Natural Beauty In Lucerne “You cannot stop the waves, but you can learn to surf.” -Jon Kabat-Zinn The beauty of a place can be powerful. Paragliding over the lakes of Lucerne Switzerland is when I fully realized the true power that the... Continue reading
Posted Sep 30, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Image
little Known, Much To Learn Discovering Who My Classmates Truly Are “I am not what you see. I am what time and effort and interaction slowly unveil.” ― Richelle E. Goodrich, When I returned to Fenn this year, I worried about how school would be without so many of my... Continue reading
Posted Sep 29, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Great essay Fitz! I loved how you provided great points about the importance of journaling. What I thought was even more powerful was how journaling has played a role and your life. One of the best aspects of your writing was your conclusions of your paragraphs which I personally loved especially your second to last paragraphs conclusion. Well done!
Toggle Commented Sep 29, 2019 on Remember the Time... at 108 Freshman English
Image
Takeaways From Camp Belknap Leadership, a smaller community, different scenery & different people "Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better." -Albert Einstein Hollering and laughter echoed from the crowd of ten energetic boys chanting “go no cinco, cinco we won’t” with ecstatic repetition. A bundle of... Continue reading
Posted Sep 25, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Sam you had a great humorous opening which is great. I liked how you said a community can be a lot of things like it can “be a fellowship, like a group of friends.” Your piece was very powerful and expressed its ideas with detail that brought me personally into your writing. Well done Sam this was a pleasure to read!
Toggle Commented Sep 24, 2019 on Three Important Values at 2020 Dean, Sam
Well done Elliot, I can tell you worked very hard on this. This piece was very relatable and i too last year wished I had realized like you had said in your writing that I can have fun with everyone. I really liked how you summed up your piece with a heartfelt conclusion about the ninth grade and how the coming year will be a great year! This was a pleasure to read great job!
Well written finely! This piece was very relatable and could keep your attention at all times. I really liked how you said that “there is a place that everyone has that they have a lot of really good memories from” and I completely agree. This piece made me think about some of my experiences which I thought was a great aspect of your writing style in this piece. Great job creating the essence of community, the power of place, and the value of stewardship into a beautifully crafted journal entry!
Toggle Commented Sep 24, 2019 on Three Values at 2020 Stevens, Finley
Image
A Powerful Community Of Stewards At Fenn “Alone, we can do so little; together, we can do so much” ~Helen Keller. A community is built by the people who share a common goal, interest or identity. It can be a comprised of people who share a neighborhood, a town, a... Continue reading
Posted Sep 23, 2019 at 2020 Moskow, Jack