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Fenn school
Just a young man from the fenn school trying to pursue his career in blogging. Read my blogs to live through my best moments
Interests: Basketball, blogging(of course).
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I’ve been at fenn for six years I’m ready to leave This ride was severe But it’s over and I’m full of relief I made friends I made brothers I learned how to support each other Favorite teachers name is Fitz He taught me how not to quit Favorite place... Continue reading
Posted May 15, 2019 at Nkimbeng
Bird Outside in the open grassy green field there was a large ancient great red oak tree a bird with the striped colors of Garfield the bird lived its lengthy life and was free the bird flew in the bright blue open sky when it flew above the fluffy white... Continue reading
Posted May 15, 2019 at Nkimbeng
Why Thoreau doesn’t like charity Its always good to give, or is it. In the chapter “Economy” in the book Walden, Henry David Thoreau challenges the fact that all charity is good. While it’s hard to argue that giving to the less fortunate is bad; sometimes it is more complicated... Continue reading
Posted Apr 26, 2019 at Nkimbeng
New Gym find a place inside where there’s joy and the joy will burn out the pain -Joseph Campbell There’s no place like home, or is there.Throughout my six years at fenn, there’s been one place that has continuously made me feel like home. Basketball is a passion of mine... Continue reading
Posted Apr 23, 2019 at Nkimbeng
Good job on this Rylan you describe the scene very well and keep me locked in throughout your paragraph
Toggle Commented Apr 19, 2019 on A Moment of Reflection at Chandler
This is a very well structured piece good job mike.
Toggle Commented Apr 19, 2019 on Journaling About Place at Lando
This one hit hard malp. Although I quit band in 6th grade I still know how it feels. And for you being in band since 4th grade I bet it stings knowing that that March was your last one with fenn. All in all this was a good peice
Toggle Commented Apr 19, 2019 on A Reflection at Alpers
Good job harry this was a well structured essay and I fully agree with you said that people as a whole are always focused on their needs instead of what life has always given to us. Your quote is extremely long but I understand you need to get through that word count
Toggle Commented Apr 19, 2019 on Nature at Bertos
This is what I called images on action. This peice was great and I felt like I was there with you as you walked along the fence. You added tons of detail and kept me interested throughout your whole writing. Good job
Toggle Commented Apr 19, 2019 on A Quite Walk at Barton
Pause for a moment and reflect As I head to the dusty large basketball courts, I start to think to think about what I have been doing in my life. Over the weekend all I have been doing is staying home playing fortnite, and watching YouTube. I finally realized that... Continue reading
Posted Apr 17, 2019 at Nkimbeng
Good job on this Tim. Your opening really set me off in a good place and your conclusion was the cherry on top. Awesome conclusion I fully agree with you. One thing I would recommend is to proof read over this
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Walden #3 at Hibben
Good job on this Ryan you peice is very well structured you started with the question then what Thoreau’s opinions where adding quotes and you ended by saying whether or not you agreed with him. Good job
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Clothing and Shelter at Lewis, Ryan
Good job on this Oscar. You had a lot to say and you were able to deliver those things In a great way.
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Clothing and Shelter Thoreau Essay at Patton
Good job on this mike.i really loved the last sentence in your opening. Also in your second part where you ended with a question, as it made me think. What I would recommend is to split you second paragraph in to two but other than that you did a really good job on this
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Walden Response #3 at Lando
Good job on the malp. First thing that popped out to me was your second paragraph and your block quote. You did a really good job explaining yourself in the third paragraph. All in all this was a good essay
Good job on this harry. You used the block quote correctly and then explained it in the next paragraph. You also added a question in the opening which I love. One thing I would recommend is to fix the date as we are not in 2014 lol.
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Thoreau’s Beauty at Bertos
Good job on this Conor. I really like your opening sentence as you got a chuckle out of me. Also I like how you added questions in your opening. You used the quotes correctly and explained them very well. All in all this was a good writing peice
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on What do we Actually Need? at MacClean
Good job on this Andrew. I really love how you explained your thoughts after every quote you included particularly the one where you said everyone has their own shelter and if it works for them then it’s fine. Also you had an incredible closing sentence.
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Walden Writing Prompt #3 at Heinze
Wow wow. That might have been the best opening sentence I’ve read so far. You really hooked me into your peice and I was intrigued on what else you had to say. Also I agree with all the points you made about character being defined by action. All in all this was a very well structured essay.
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Clothes and Shelter at Barton
Really good job on this alijah. After every quote you explained what you thought it meant. I fully agree with you on the first quote. Us humans rely too much on companies to make our necessities, and that will hurt us in the long run.
Toggle Commented Apr 17, 2019 on Walden Writing Prompt #3 at Clark
Fru Nkimbeng Economy Literary Reflection Fitz’s Class 4/11/19 Appreciating What You Have To live a life fulfilled reflects on the things you have with gratitude - Jaren Davis Words never felt so meaningful. in Fitz English class I am reading Walden, by David Henry Thoreau. We are currently on chapter... Continue reading
Posted Apr 11, 2019 at Nkimbeng
Family over everything Family and friends and hidden treasures. Seek them and enjoy their riches When asked what are the the true and most basic necessities in my life two things come to mind; family and hope. I don’t know what I would do without my family, they have been... Continue reading
Posted Apr 7, 2019 at Nkimbeng
Fall The start of school The end of summer break Begins football season Catching up with friends After not seeing them That’s what fall is about The joy of touchdowns Rushing to homecoming For the tasty treats Eying the leaves fall Hoping for snow to come Enjoying the view When... Continue reading
Posted Apr 7, 2019 at Nkimbeng
A First Impression Coming into class on Friday, I thought Fitz was going to continue to bore me about his love for the poems he wrote on Crows and Swallows. Man was I wrong. Friday was instead a class where we supposedly read the first chapter of Walden. The reason... Continue reading
Posted Apr 3, 2019 at Nkimbeng
I Am Not Hungry I am not hungry Then my eyes glance toward you And I feel empty Meta- when the time came to start this poem I was extremely hungry. I had gummies in my bag but I didn’t want to eat them. After time of fighting with myself... Continue reading
Posted Apr 1, 2019 at Nkimbeng