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My Final Metacognition “Goodbyes make you think. They make you realize what you’ve had, what you’ve lost, and what you’ve taken for granted.” – Ritu Ghatourey Well, here we are. Fenn is over. Not over for the summer, but over over. My incredible times here were cut short by an... Continue reading
Posted May 28, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
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Family and Chores 
 How quality time with you family is worth it 
 
 “Every child must have chores to do. It gives them dignity in work and the joy of labor.” -Earl Hammer Jr. 

 Almost everyone has to do mundane tasks. In my life, this isn’t too... Continue reading
Posted May 5, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
This is a big chunk for 30 minutes. This shows how you just let your thoughts run free like Fitz said to. That made the piece incredible, and polished. Good work.
Toggle Commented May 3, 2020 on The Power of I at 2021 Brady, Nicholas
This is an awesome piece. You define yourself physically, then you move to dreams and ideas, which I think worked perfectly. This piece has an amazing flow and conveys your thoughts well. Good writing.
Toggle Commented May 3, 2020 on The Power of I at 2021 Kennealy, Rory
This is incredible! The whole essay flowed like a mountain creek. It had an amazing "feel" that just can't really be described. I loved this entire thing from start to finish. The end was also amazing. It gave the readers something to think about. Awesome job, Sean.
Toggle Commented May 3, 2020 on I at 2021 Leahy, Sean
Those times are always hard with a friend because it usually ends up in sadness. You portrayed all emotions one would reasonably feel incredibly well, which made this piece fantastic. I really liked the end. You hammered home your main thought and left the readers something to think about. Good job, Will.
Toggle Commented May 3, 2020 on This is Nonsense at 2021 Simon, William
I love how deep and emotional this piece is. The first paragraph is amazing. You used a lot of very good techniques. This is probably one of your best essays yet. Incredible job.
Toggle Commented May 3, 2020 on The power of I at 2021 Soukup, Colin
I mean, what do you expect? I hope that one day I will grow up, and these horrid times will be nothing but a distant gray memory. I want everything to go well in my life. My parents invest their souls into me. I'm their gold puppet, exploring the world... Continue reading
Posted Apr 28, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
Time is a powerful being with all in its grasp It takes what it wants It shows you how small you are compared to it It may make you, It may ruin you. It whips you and beats you down until you are nothing but a husk of a person,... Continue reading
Posted Apr 26, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
I am but a sailor on the rough tides upon us. My ship nothing but driftwood on the beast that we call the present. My cremates just as fearful as I. The rumors told me docks were closed until the storm passed, but there might be some cleanup. Our scurry... Continue reading
Posted Apr 23, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
Incredible! I know you dont really need our compliments, but wow, this is amazing. I love the use of the French word *essai*, it is a great theme and ties the whole *essay* together. Good job teaching those 8th graders.
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Just an update on reading I have been reading short stories for a while now. I have liked them, and I think I have gotten a good amount of information and knowable from them. I'm not too sure if this is supposed to be another reading log where we depict... Continue reading
Posted Apr 22, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
I could really see our class in this essay. It is pretty funny to me all these thoughts George has. I have probably had some very similar to his. I like this "meta"cognition
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How some dirty leaves made my family better "You leave home to seek your fortune and, when you get it, you go home and share it with your family." -Anita Baker It was a windy cold day. The brisk winds blowing up against our bodies, the troubling task ahead of... Continue reading
Posted Apr 16, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
This is really interesting to see how life was for children back then. Now, its way less playing outside with your neighborhood friends, and more playing with them virtually. I think each era has their strengths and weaknesses. This gives me some inspiration for my story.
Toggle Commented Apr 14, 2020 on Danny, Jimmy & Me at 101 8th Grade Fitz Homepage
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Just more information about my style Music is the universal language of mankind. -Henry Wadsworth Longfellow Round three baby, let's finish this. Music is today topic of choice. I will make sure to call whatever I am sincerely writing about "stupid" or "boring" so in case anyone else doesn't like... Continue reading
Posted Apr 12, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
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Tough times with high school and leaving Fenn “To say goodbye is to die a little.” -Raymond Chandler "Another one of Eli's long rants about something not that important." you think. Little did you know, that is entirely true, but this time, it's full of introspection. My expectations for my... Continue reading
Posted Apr 10, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
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My thoughts on humanity's situation "Vulnerability is basically uncertainty, risk, and emotional exposure." -Brene Brown Lets talk Covid. How have you been feeling in these times of uncertainty? These lines I keep hearing almost every day. The constant concern, which don't get me wrong, its good, but some privacy would... Continue reading
Posted Apr 3, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
Interesting Videos How some videos are spectacular 
 “The purpose of life is to live it, to taste experience to the utmost, to reach out eagerly and without fear for newer and richer experience.” -Eleanor Roosevelt 
 Some videos can just wow you, and that is why I save these... Continue reading
Posted Mar 1, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
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My Cat Mittens 
 The most loving animal 
 
 ”Time spent with cats is never wasted.” -Sigmund Freud 
 A thick warm feeling engulfs my body. I notice the how soft the pure white fur is on my nose. Small skin like beans touch my face, and I hear... Continue reading
Posted Mar 1, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
This is awesome descriptive writing. I felt as if I was there with you guys. Amazing writing.
Toggle Commented Feb 27, 2020 on Fitz Blog Post #1 at 2021 Ali, Oliver
I feel the same way about this subject. This is great descriptive writing. The use of adjectives and other great words was really special. Awesome job
Toggle Commented Feb 27, 2020 on The Days at Fenn at 2021 Brady, Nicholas
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Changes come with grief ”One day everything that you worried about before will be gone and all that you will be thinking about is the good times that you had back then.“ -Lena Karesh “Damn,” I said full of wistfulness. The thought of leaving Fenn is almost heartbreaking. Everyone must... Continue reading
Posted Feb 25, 2020 at 2021 Zahavi, Eli
Sounds like a fun time! I always love Halloween. Great writing and nice job
Toggle Commented Feb 24, 2020 on An Experience with a Friend at 2021 Troiano, Max