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Hudson Wesel February 11th, 2020 9th Grade Fitz English Lessons From the Now, for the Future In life, when looking back on something you can always find bits and pieces, where you wish you had the knowledge you do know, back then. While writing my heroic cycle story titled “The... Continue reading
Posted Feb 12, 2020 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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Hudson Wesel Jan 13th, 2020 Fitz English 9 Once A Story, Now An Odyssey “A story has no beginning or end: arbitrarily one chooses that moment of experience from which to look back or from which to look ahead.” ― Graham Greene, The End of the Affair In life, it’s... Continue reading
Posted Jan 13, 2020 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
Finley, you are able to use your critical thinking skills to tell the reader the overarching theme of the story. You are also able to identify key tequnics like similes and metaphors to describe to the reader, how they impact the story and add to it. While there are great things in your writing the one thing I would change is the unessecary setup for quotes like “in this quote”. While there some things I would tweak, it is clear you understood the theme and meaning of this essay.
Finley, I like your use of muscular verbs to emphasize key points in your writing. You also use nice images and actions that the reader can relate to, to paint a clear picture that tells the story of your tradition. Finally top it all of with an interesting last sentance that captivates your reader. While there are great things in your piece, the one thing I wish you had put in was a little more setup before describing your tradition. Overall, great essay
Toggle Commented Dec 18, 2019 on Mid Term Paragraph at 2020 Stevens, Finley
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Hudson Wesel December 13, 2019 Fitz 9th Grade English A Story of Childhood “Story of Christmas, the Bliss of Childhood” “Do something," he said. And we threw all our snowballs into the smoke - I think we missed Mr. Prothero - and ran out of the house to the telephone... Continue reading
Posted Dec 18, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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Hudson Wesel December 15, 2019 Fitz 9th Grade English Making Pizza and Powerful Traditions “Just because something is traditional is no reason to do it, of course.” ~Lemony Snicket, In life, there are special things people participate in every year. Along with many others, I have a special tradition I... Continue reading
Posted Dec 18, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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The Greatness of the First Twelve Books of The Odyssey Themes of Book, Lessons of Life “Be not afraid of greatness. Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and others have greatness thrust upon them.” ~William Shakespeare, Twelfth Night If you’re not tough you’re weak, and Telemachus and Odysseus know... Continue reading
Posted Nov 21, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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Looking Back Can Hold What’s Ahead ”Looking Back isn’t going to help because moving forward is what you have to do” ~McKayla Maroney Memory is the source of grief. In life, looking back at what you have done badly, will eclipse what you will do in the future and it... Continue reading
Posted Nov 5, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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The Athletic Experience that Was Sporting “The harder you fall, the heavier your heart; the heavier your heart, the stronger you climb; the stronger you climb, the higher your pedestal.” ― Criss Jami, Killosophy I put the W in my last name (Wesel) because I don’t lose. The bright gleaming... Continue reading
Posted Nov 5, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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The Values Of Determination and Fate “Here I am at your mercy, princess — are you a goddess or a mortal? If one of the gods who rule the skies up there, you’re Artemis to the life” -Odysseus Determination is the driving force of action. In the story, The Odyssey,... Continue reading
Posted Nov 5, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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The Man or Thing Across the Lake I've been into summer camps ever since I was a little child. I was in the Boy Scouts and went to camps pretty much every summer. It was a cold Dark Night at this one Camp I was working at. The whistle blew... Continue reading
Posted Nov 3, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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Adam Connecting two Different Cultures In My Life “Sometimes things seem so different because they have so much in common” “The invisible threads make the best ties” ~Friedrich Nietzsche In life, you are able to make connections from a variety of things that almost seem like they have nothing in... Continue reading
Posted Oct 21, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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Hudson Wesel 9th Grade English October 18, 2019 The Respect You Give, Given Back ”Respect is something given not taken” “Life is too short to waste your time on people who don’t respect, appreciate, and value you.” ~Roy T. Bennett In life, you must respect people or they will not... Continue reading
Posted Oct 21, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
“The most important thing that a school can give our group is the power to choose. To be able to choose what we want to do for sports or arts or anything else. We are now young adults, and with that new maturity, we feel like we need to take more control in our own lives. It can be just small stuff”. Not much needs to be said, this quote reminds me of you smart, creative and above all logical. I also liked your broad title to get the reader thinking before they even read the first sentence of your writing. Amazing job!
Toggle Commented Oct 16, 2019 on 9th Grade Year Improvement Writing at 2020 Dean, Sam
Elliot, you have 2 LL’s in your name and you pasted both of them on that blog. I love the blunt, honest and brave statements you made. It was nice to see someone fully expressing how they feel about certain aspects of their community.
I loved not only your thinking of new deeper ideas to improve the ninth grade, but you also had great uses of personal experiences to help the reader envision your ideas.
Toggle Commented Oct 16, 2019 on Ninth Grade at 2020 Moskow, Jack
Connor, I agree with you when you talked about preserving or reviving the long-standing traditions of Fenn. (Psst) There ma- or -ay not be something in t-- w-r-- t--- I’m P-an-i-- Opps… :( There is no internet connection. Guess you will have to wait and see...
Toggle Commented Oct 16, 2019 on Independent blog assignment at 2020 Soukup, Connor
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Hudson Wesel October 12, 2019 Fitz 9th Grade English Looking Back Through A Mirror “Fear is the chains that are put on by yourself” “Fears are educated into us, and can if we wish, be educated out.” — Karl Augustus Menninger In life, it is sometimes ourselves that hold us... Continue reading
Posted Oct 12, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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Hudson Wesel October 9, 2019 Fitz 9th Grade English Ninth Grade, Making the Grade Helping Others, To Help Yourself “Your life does not get better by chance, it gets better by change.” ~Jim Rohn In life, people want to help each other to make their lives better. I’m currently a... Continue reading
Posted Oct 9, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
Hudson Wesel October 4, 2019 Fitz 9th Grade English Constructive Criticism, That Built A Soccer Player Don’t let criticism break you, but rather fix you Being able to learn from people that are older and wiser than you is an important skill to have. This skill was important for me... Continue reading
Posted Oct 5, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
The Uplifting Feedback Helpful comments, better writers The only way to get better, is to get feedback from yourself or others. While reading several writing pieces that were written by my classmates, I had to give them some informative feedback. I was sitting on a couch, in a house that... Continue reading
Posted Oct 5, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
Hudson Wesel Fitz 9th Grade English October 4, 2019 Spacing Out In A Dream of Writing “An exhausted student, with a flaw to draw” There are times in life where you space out, and there are other times where that’s the only thing you can focus on. I experienced both... Continue reading
Posted Oct 5, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
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Hudson Wesel October 4, 2019 Fitz 9th Grade English The Whistle That Blew Me Away “First Clamp, Last Goal” ”There is substitute for hard work, never give never stop believing never stop fighting” ~Hope Hicks In life, we face hard times that we must get through. I was much like... Continue reading
Posted Oct 4, 2019 at 2020 Wesel, Henry
I could really see how you opened yourself up to your writing which means there is more you in there. Great piece
Toggle Commented Oct 5, 2019 on A Tough Decision at 2020 Johnson, Elliot
The implication of emotion and dialogue throughout your piece makes it 1000x better. Amazing job!
Toggle Commented Oct 5, 2019 on Power Of Place at 2020 Moskow, Jack